Of Students

From an exercise in writing dialog:
“Hey, homie, what’s up?” my best friend ST half shouts.

“Just chillaxing,” AM replies a hint of bordum in her voice.

“Well, I wanna show you a new handshake that’s totally fisizziling.”

“Sure, but only if you’ll learn mine because I guarantee it’s much more smoking,” replied AM.

“You’re on!” ST exclaimed.

From a persuasive letter to a leader, in this case President Obama:
If we have shorten school days are shorten, then students would have more time to spend with are familes. On school days I wake up at 6:00-6:30. My dad is usally still asleep and my mom is at work. At 7:45 my dad is still asleep when my sissters and I get on the Bus. This means we don’t ever get to see are parents in the morning. And when we come home around 4:00 my dad soon leaves to go to work at 4:30, He comes home at 11:00, which is after our bed time at 9:00. We dont get to see our parents at all on weekdays. And on weekends we go over to our grandparents’ house, so we don’t get to see them then either.

Another reason to shorten school day is so that we can have a lot more fun. I would get to see my mom and dad, and we could go places in the afternoons and I could have a better relationship with them. We could be home texting and all that. I have form 4:30-9:00 to do all the fun things. That is not alot of time.

If we have shorter school days, then studnts wouldn’t have to listen to thier teachers talk all the time. Thats a proplem because teachers do get ignoring sometimes.

So if you can, please make the school day shorter. No school on Mondays and Fridays would be great, too.